Haiku Contest

September 13, 2006

 

I have come to realize that much of the pain in the world is cause by insufficient Haiku.

I seek to remedy it thuswise:

Traditional (5-7-5)

Write a Haiku jerk
Would you have me look a fool
I will destroy you

Alternately you can write a Beats Entropy-style Haiku:

Three verses of 7-5-7 that tell a loose story. Punctuation optional. Spelling and grammar optional.

Who has stolen my old life?
I commend you sir.
Were you not my dead brother!

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Let us ride this giant bee
She thinks us her queen
Tomorrow there shall be war

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The worker grows suspicious
Stings us twenty times
The war is surely lost now

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You are encouraged to add your own.

The best one will receive a fabulous mystery prize.

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14 Responses to “Haiku Contest”

  1. K-Fed Says:

    But why do you forsake me,
    Justin Timberlake?
    Is it because of Brittney?

  2. K-Fed Says:

    Peanut Butter Jelly Time
    Why do they mock me?
    Peanut Butter Jelly Time

  3. Moira Meeper Says:

    is there a contest deadline?

    Tabled, my ointment

    How you itch my angry rash

    That dirty bastard!

    Haiku

  4. JiFF Says:

    I friggen hate the haiku
    It once killed my friend
    I shall get my revenge soon

    It may try to run from me
    It thinks it can hide
    But I am too smart for it

    i will play with it a while
    i will let it think
    i have lowered my resolve

    I shall plan and plot its doom
    I will hunt it down
    it shall not be safe from me
    ==========================================
    Scared of the mystery prize I am
    it will hurt no doubt
    My Bet : a turkey sandwich!

  5. JiFF Says:

    Gaw, i messed up the last one.

    Let me try it again.

    Afraid of the Mystery Prize
    It will hurt no Doubt!
    my Bet: A turkey Sandwich.

    I’ve angered the Haiku god
    for my shoddy work
    it will hurt me for sure now.

    I should avoid open skies
    i am surely dead
    no one can hide from the beat

    or from the beatings. in fact
    I am long over due
    for a swift and painful hurt

    please have mercy HaiKu
    I am but a man
    with terrible Poetry


  6. “is there a contest deadline?”

    The contest will end
    when beauty falls from the world
    or monday morning

  7. untao Says:

    a dashing young valliant
    once upon a time
    fell prey to a pair of pants

    you’d think it impossible
    to be trapped in pants
    but they were stuck on his head

    turns out when you pull too hard
    pants can choke a man
    and scissors will be needed.
    .

  8. Frambojan Says:

    You have pants maybe
    I take them to get clean yes
    Frambojan is sly

  9. The Kenji Says:

    AJ’s pants- the fantasy
    That slaps me silly
    Please, someone break the cycle

  10. Tony s. Says:

    Room Room Rev Meep Clank
    I make love to my moped
    Go dirty scooter

  11. thekenji Says:

    Unh, unh, whut whut, west-saiiiiiddd-de
    Fo’ shizz-zzz-zzz-zle
    oooooh kaaaaaaayyye!!! whuuu-uuu-uuu-uuu-ttt!!!

  12. Dr. Entropic Says:

    If I could forget
    Something I can’t remember
    That would be tight


  13. I’m not impressed
    He just hangs around all day
    Lazy Messiah

  14. A.J. Saki Says:

    Staring outwardly,
    fighting an urge, pregnant pause,
    “Ha, Haiku!” Bless you.


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